Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
Alright so here I am on behalf of the checklist challenge, operating a little out of my comfort zone in the realm of poetry, so I will be giving mostly my impressions since I am not the best when it comes to the more technical side of things here. But let's see where this takes us here, I'm already very intrigued by what this title could hint at especially given the shape of this poem.
Well this one really has some very strong imagery going for it here. It definitely makes you see quite a visceral series of images here, and this one is rather straightforward too in terms of what its getting at. Its certainly quite a sad moment and I love the emotion you managed to drum up here, tying it quite nicely to that title too. I really did not expect to see a concept like that used so indirectly and so powerfully here and I am loving it.
I think while this is a poem that takes a couple of reads to really digest, the meaning is quite clear right from the get go and without really diving too far in, you get a nice powerful image and the emotions really work so well as a result and I think you manage to convey this message to us quite nicely.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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