I really like this, I think it's creative, enticing, and interesting! I love how you had blacked out certain words you intended to not let the reader know, I thought it was very mysterious, encouraging me to read more! I also liked how you crossed different lines out, as if you were actually writing the thought in pen and you couldn't erase it and just crossed it out. I think you did a wonderful job! Keep up the good work!:)
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