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Behold! For this is a review which is not a review!
It is rather difficult to review something which is no longer present. I expect that if I were to ever manage such, and manage such consistently, I should become renowned world-wide for my clairvoyant aptitude. But I'm not there yet, so this not-review will have to suffice until then.
In the meantime, consider this a review IOU to be repaid whenever you PM me (with link to this post) asking for one review on any work you post in the future.
Until then, I hope reading this not-review was at least amusing.
Thank you so much for reviewing! I agree, I think I'm going to change it to running! Again, thank you so much.
Hi.. Your lyrics are really good.. I loved the emotions emanating from it the whole while.. you've expressed them brilliantly.. The only thing I thought could be changed for the good was that in line 2 you've written 'run'.. I feel it'll be more appropriate if you change it to 'running'.. That's all I could think of.. The chorus part was specially good.. Good Job..
Harshita:)
Pleasepleaseplease give me your opinions! It would be much appreciated!