Hi Rei, Good evening I'm Riothe
Your poem has a deep meaning and full of metaphors. While I'm reading your poem, line by line, i felt something wrong, it'll going to be a creepy poem.
but these lines have a unique twist and i really like it.
"Here lies my last words spoke,
Amongst pitiful pleas I wrote.
My heart, mind, soul's been broke,
By the fangs clamped round my throat"
it's just a simple stanza but if I'll going to dive in this pool of metaphors, it seems like a hugging a cactus.
—riothe selcouth 🍂
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