Hey Riellehn! It is absolutely awesome to read your poem. Your poem holds a vivid imagination. And it expresses strong emotions and feelings. I like your poem. Each and every line of your poem expresses a unique feeling corpse.
"I have two eyes to see
All the traps that caught me
All the mistakes I made
The fatal miscalculations" I really like these lines in your poem.....
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