Published May 11, 2008
Does it hurt,
When you’re
Bleeding.
Time’s always here
In the warmth of my arms
And you’re sitting there
Freezing.
Don’t leave me. Just hold on to my
Breathing. Now
It’s cool
That you love me.
You only saw what your eyes came across
When you lay there above me.
And it stings,
When you feel me.
I’m always slowly closing. Now.
Open your eyes, and wish you were in here
Within here
Near here
The shadow of shower sheers.
Wrapping me close, in your arms
Hu-humming, our melody
In my ears.
And never let go-o.
Oh my sheets
How they’ve missed you
My eyes, hands, and waist, legs
My out and my in babe
And all else that’s kissed you
Just don’t feel me. I. Can’t. Take. You. Near. Me. Now.
You were gone.
And I was a lone.
The person, that worsens
And turn sins in circles
We rehearsed this, and you know
I can’t breathe. I just exhale, while I’m waiting. Now.
Open your eyes, and wish you were in here
Within here
Near here
The shadow of shower sheers.
Wrapping me close, in your arms
Hu-humming, our melody
In my ears.
And never let go-o.
We’re gone.
(repeat 3 times)
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wow =]
You really used a lot of good imagary in there ^.^
The first verse is my faourite i think, and a catching opener.
And also, it seems quite sexy, especially with some of the lines, and the seventh verse.
It flows quie well to, you can imagine a melody or tune in the background, it'd make a really good song =]]
Its very powerful and visual to, i am going to see if you have any more ^.^
Really good, well done, Eva XxXxX