Published March 17, 2008
Two, two that yell
Two that fight.
Two that turn to
you and ask, "Who
is right?"
How do you
Decide between
The two
You call your
Friends?
How can you
Choose between,
Your best friend
And one you feel
Led to help?
Who is right?
Who is wrong?
There are two
Between these
You must choose
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Hey this was good! I liked it. I just caught a couple things I thought might be typos.
'You call you' Is the second 'you' supposed to be 'your'?
Same, is 'you' supposed to be 'your?
Great job!
-Sometimes-