nameless

by Pushca
  • October 24, 2006
  • Poetry
  • Other

yeah, i deleted it...

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emotion_less
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emotion_less wrote a review · Fri Oct 27, 2006 7:32 am

i felt the emotion, but it kind of seemed like you were rambling or venting. try to not pull in all different topics (all different reasons you are mad?) at once. it gets confusing.

also, this kinda seemed like a rant. maybe re-write this later when you can organize your thoughts better in writing.

i hope this helps



"Beneath this mask, there is more than flesh. Beneath this mask, there is an idea, Mr. Creedy, and ideas are bulletproof."
— V for Vendetta