This is my prologue of my sci fi story set in a different galaxy.
Note: This galaxy has had contact with the Star Wars galaxy.
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Hey PN, it's better for the readers if you copy and paste the text of your prologue into the reply box of YWS, rather than expect them to download it and then comment. That's the general custom around here.