Hello there, @PoetChan! Though it is unlikely that you will ever see this, here's a review for your poem!
First Impression
I just really loved these poems! I'd never read any triolets before, and so I was really impressed by these!
What I Dislike
I dislike that the third poem was in this collection-- it seemed to be out of place because all of the others were focused on nature rather than people.
What I Like
Your rhythm and rhymes are automatically perfect-- it has to be with a triolet (I Googled them ). I really think that this was just awesome, and I was blown away!
I also like how (ignoring that third poem) you stuck to nature themes in this collection. It really built up my excitement while reading these.
In Summary
I would recommend removing the third poem and adding it to another collection, but other than that, I love these!
Have a nice [*insert time of day here*]!!!
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