Published October 19, 2012
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i really like this. every time i read it, it makes me stop and think..
"wow, i wish i could put that much emotion in a peom like that!" i really thought you did a Awsome job on this!
I like this. The message is a little unclear but I think that's part of the appeal of poetry
so that's okay. I like your rhyming that seems a little random but it adds to the poem quite well.
You capitalized heavens...I don't know if that's supposed to be capitalized or not so I'll just point it out and leave it up to you.
Other than that there was nothing else I could point out that might be wrong so great job!
Keep Writing
-Raelyn