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this poem is interesting, a little hard to follow what with the random capitalization, "they're all lies" is the proper grammar, not "there". The ending was good, very strong until you added the last "no more..." I think that weakened it a lot and stretched it thin. Otherwise a good poem. Could use a little more content to help the reader understand the source of your discontent.