Published November 28, 2008
What an interesting topic choice.
It's pretty good except for the fact that you used the wrong form of "there" in one of your lines. And also, you put unecessary apostrophes in words.
Un-speakable evil’s walk the street.
Always on the hunt for there next victims.
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