This is very relatable and deep. Some walls must have had to come down to put this out on the internet where anybody can judge it in whatever way they please. Sometimes walls can be good, other times, they can block you off from the goodness in people. Anyways... I like how with every sentence, we get deeper and deeper into the poem. Most writers spend to much time on introduction rather then focusing on the middle and end. I get it though, good introductions are what hook the readers. But the middle gives you plot, which is important, and the ending is what leaves the reader wanting more. I am getting carried away again. Sorry about that. Anyways, this poem was not like that at all. I liked the equality of the beginning middle and end. Looking forward to more from you. God bless!
Points: 47
Reviews: 6
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