wow mockingjay you did amazingly wonderful ;D
I felt like I was in this magical land as I read it, like I could hear the creatures!
And I love how you used all kinds of different words to describe everything,
you had no boring words, witch I loved!
You keep things interesting!
and when you talked about the setting and described it, within 2 seconds I was wanting to read it!
Truth be told, it was so good I was sad when it ended
The only thing was, the one lower case letter,
everything else was capitalized, except one letter,
not shore if that was intended or not but I will go ahead and tell you witch one it was.
"What comes here? Whispering voices start to sing,
adding to the charm"
I really do like that part just the "adding" I am pretty shore needs to be capitalized
But you did wonderful! pleas PLEAS do tell me when more of your work comes out!
Love, Gold.
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