Published January 9, 2011
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There is an article on apostrophes in the Knowledge Base that I think you might find helpful. You can read the article here. Basically, plurals do not have apostrophes.
I do wonder what this is. Is it a tagline? A six-word story? If it's the latter, it doesn't work very well since there's no concrete hint of anything greater or more substantial. For instance, Hemingway's famous six-word story, "For sale: Baby shoes. Never used." has strong emotional impact because it directly alludes to a mother who lost her baby, probably due to a miscarriage.
Writing anything with a limited word count is extremely challenging, but it's great practice.
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