Hi! I'm just here for a quick review.
So... I really liked this poem. The metaphors and symbolism were just right, neither too obvious nor too subtle. I loved that.
I felt the lines were lacking a little continuity, but surprisingly, that didn't distract from the poem, it somehow added to the rhythm. You don't see a poem like that every day, so hats off to you!
I really liked the last part:
Help me roar it out
Before it tears my heart apart
Calm me, soothe me
Give me one good night
I want to feel one more time
How it feels to walk
Happy in the rain
Everything about this poem was simply perfect! The alignment, the spacing, the title, flow, principle... just right.
I have no critiques to this poem.
Keep Writing!
Points: 1285
Reviews: 76
Donate