Hello my friend, NympheaLily here!
Aw yeah, Five Nights at Freddy's! Love this game and the storyline so much! Right, to the poem. If you're not a Five Night's at Freddy's fan, you probably wouldn't get some of the things in the content. For example, you seemed to seamlessly put in every aspect of the gaming series that show any kind of importance. The bite of '87, the five murdered kids, "it's me", the checkered hallways of the pizzeria, you name it!
Some questions about the writing;
Who is he? I'm assuming you're talking about Purple Guy or one of the animatronics. Or maybe even the Marionette, but that's doubtful.
When you mention the part about maggots, the wording confused me just a tad. Maybe give it a more straightforward sentance structure?
That's all I have for you today! Happy Holidays and as always, KEEP THOSE FINGERS TYPING!
Ciao!
~NympheaLily
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