Published June 17, 2011
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Bol, colleges want to see what you can offer and what you've done and will do; you're an investment to them. Humour often misses the review committees unless the college you apply for is looking for that. Keep that in mind.
I like it a lot, but I don't know how well a college would like it. I don't know that much about college, though, so maybe they would. I REALLY liked it. I liked the word choice and theme. Good job.