Published September 1, 2006
bohemia island
full of nercophiliac bride seekers
in a surge of screaming rhapsodies
whispering schemes to the dwellers of serene green
the hills are alive with zombie villagers
they've been infected with boom boom fever
watch out for bermuda shorts
watch out for barabado's lingerie
watch out for moon's gamma rays
watch out for boom boom fever coming alive again
the villagers dancing in decadence
the bonfire grows with deceit
the faces of nude women and men displaying themselves
like wax figures lost in a sea fire
pollinating themselves
like genocide in a sea of extinction
bohemia island
enjoy the kills
enjoy the thrills
enjoy the toxins in the water
we want you to love the fear
we want you to become a martyr
boom boom fever make them all dance
make them all walk off bohemia island
into the deep abyss of bliss
kiss your dead partner
kiss the giant tourists
kiss the tiny martinis
kiss the burning piano and let it drop
into the volacano of burning misery
and we'll sing about it while in the shower
bohemia island take me away with boom boom fever
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This seems more like the lyrics of a song than narrative poetry IMO
Parts of it were a little gross, necrophilia isn't my thing..I'm sure you could say the same about my love story though lol!