This really hit me close to home as my grandfather fought in the war and he recently passed away. We were close but all that is besides the point This will be a relatively short review but I hope it can also be sweet Here we go;
Personally, as a fan of /hearing/ words in writing, your use of the ticking of the clock really appealed to be from the very start and I may now be positively biased, but oh well
I can't really say a whole lot on individual parts of the poem, but as a whole I think you created something that does its job fantastically well. As I was reading and now that I'm done and writing a review, I saw and still see a woman whose sweetheart was drafted or volunteered and went overseas. Of course this is a done-to-death subject, but you made it fresh to read for me anyway I did find myself close to tears on a few occasions as I read, especially at the end, oof. You really know how to jerk tears. All in all, and I think you can tell, I /really/ liked this poem, even though it made me feel :/ I will be bookmarking this for sure and reading it every once in a while Keep up the great work and I thank you for sharing this with us all!
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