I know this is kind of old now, but everything about this takes my breath away. Thank you for this effortlessly beautiful prose. <3
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I know this is kind of old now, but everything about this takes my breath away. Thank you for this effortlessly beautiful prose. <3
Hey there, Lumi!
So I saw this only had one review and decided to take a gander and see how poetry translates to prose
Though I wish I could say that my love story began by romancing the girl with sweet words: (e.g. If only eternity were a grape seed, I would labor away in vast, sweltering orchards for the centuries through which to hold you, my dear.) because to my understanding of classical literature, that is how romantics speak, and it is both inconsistent and uncomfortable to me. But no, that is not how my love story begins, and quite appropriately, it begins beneath a '92 Jeep Cherokee, having oil dripped onto my face as I had fallen soundly asleep under the warmth of the engine.
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Though I wish I could say that my love story began by romancing the girl with sweet words: (e.g. If only eternity were a grape seed, I would labor away in vast, sweltering orchards for the centuries through which to hold you, my dear.) because to my understanding of classical literature, that is how romantics speak, and it is both inconsistent and uncomfortable to me. But no, that is not how my love story begins, and quite appropriately, it begins beneath a '92 Jeep Cherokee, having oil dripped onto my face as I had fallen soundly asleep under the warmth of the engine.
His slogan--and get this--”Cleanliness is next to Godliness.” I always thought it was really clever, honestly.
And, hand on the bible, Ron’s auto shop has a smiling, curvy, neon green dick on the highway sign.
I talked to them sometimes, sure, but who didn’t?
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