'Maybe if I don't look at it,it will go away.Wash away with all my other worries that I've thought about today. Fade into the background, walk into the dark. Take away my insecurities, take away my negative thoughts. Shake off everyone that shoves their problems onto my lap.It's not mine to deal with. I've realized that I don't need to be like everyone else in society. I don't need to be one of the robots the world has created. I don't need to have the negative thoughts. Because I know some where inside me I'm destined for something.Something bigger, grander, better.In my soul, I'm a talented person. Maybe if I do look at it, it would go away. Stand up to my fears that I've dealt with today. Walk into the sunlight, let myself shine through. And do exactly what I know I was born to do.'
This poem is way too cliche and vague. I can't find much depth in these words and all i can gather from this poem is a stroppy teenager moaning, as 'Galerius' Kindly put. I dont understand the main objective of the poem. It lacks originality or movement. Try finding inspiratin in music and other literature, rather than in the media(Unless it's original)and stereotypical writings. Your wording is good so work on your themes and keep writing.
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