There was once a girl
Who didn't listen to the rain platter
Who didn't listen to the thunder storm
Who didn't listen to the sour sounds
spat to see her Sink and Drown.
Only the melodies through her headphones
Only the playful banter between us
Only 'you're such a genius!'
There is now a lady
outshining the candle flames
readying to up the game.
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