Open up
My maths book
And start to answer the question
Now remember
To make things easy
They must be equal on both the sides.
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I stare at a page of maths equations
Not a chance I'll get these right.
With a rubber for company
And a pencil beside me
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It's time to see what I can't do
To answer the equations and get it through
Just a few to answer
Then I'll be free
But that's just me
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This rubber beside me
Isn't clean at all--
What if I will get
An answer wrong?
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I don't care ---
What the teacher says
If it's not
Equal on both the sides
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It's funny how some people laugh when you get it wrong
But I will laugh back at them when I finish this song!
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It's time to see what I can't do
To answer the equations and get it through
Just a few to answer
Then I'll be free
But that's just me
__________________________________
This rubber beside me
Isn't clean at all--
What if I will get
An answer wrong?
__________________________________
I don't care--
What the teacher says
I don't mind,
'coz it's not equal on both the sides
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I am not ashamed to say that I am a seventeen year old who is in love with this movie (which is good considering that I have both a three and a five year old sisters who make us watch Frozen at least once a day since it came out.)
Which means that I love this work (although I can't do more than physically like it, sorry.)
And since I don't really like math, I really liked the ending.
I am not going to say anything about grammar because A) there are not any mistakes that I can see and B) I never critique grammar on lyrics or poetry because you can never tell what is a error and what is artistic license.
This section is really good, but if you are reading this to the Demi Lovato version, the third line is a little short and this makes the section a bit choppy.
Of course, that is just reading it while playing the beat in my head (which seems to be on constant repeat these days). If you sang it and dragged the notes out, that would work.
It's just that reading it, I can't be sure if that's what you intend. If it was then feel free to ignore me.
Oh, and if you are having trouble separating the stanzas then try pressing SHIFT and then ENTER. It seems to work for most people.
This is absolutely brilliant. I seriously love it.
Thanks for the review.
After I finished writing this I recorded myself singing this in a stupid way and I noticed that I've kind of mixed up the tunes of both versions of this song together so in some parts it might not sound right.
Hey there! Stor here to review. I really liked this lyric/parody of yours. I really like the song and this is kind of funny. Though, I didn't understand why it's not in the proper place. My favourite part was
"The rubber beside me
Isn't clean at all--
What if I will get
An answer wrong?"
That was the best part of the poem. All the other parts are also good.
Nitpicks, Spelling and Grammar Mistakes
You don't have any!!!
This is a really good poem. Keep writing. A like from me.
-Storybraniac
Oh thanks, a lot!! I'm glad you liked it!!! : )