Yes, you should keep writing, but not this story.
Anyway, Layla, try writing something more significant and then asking for opinions. There's hardly anything here to talk about.
Prokaryote
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Bruises
By:Layla
PROLOGUE
I toss and turn while I try to go to sleep. I feel so much guilt for not telling the conselor the truth about what really happened. Well what was i supposed to do? If I would've told the truth, I could've gotten jumped by his friends.
I start to cry, feeling so confused. I get up and slowly walk to the bathroom, counting each step I took. I open the top drawer and stare down at the razor blade. I pick it up, and put it in front of my face. I look down at my wrist, still crying. I put my arm over the sink and begin to cut.
I convince myself this is my punishment. I start to feel dizzy but keep cutting, deeper and deeper as I go. Then darkness.
(Tell me what you guys think. Should I keep writing?? Thank you.)
Yes, you should keep writing, but not this story.
Anyway, Layla, try writing something more significant and then asking for opinions. There's hardly anything here to talk about.
Prokaryote
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