Published March 17, 2012
I watched as you fought
I saw you turn demon
I watched as you screamed
I saw you started swinging
I watched as you hit her
I saw her screaming then
You told me not to worry
You said it was okay
You told me never to tell
You said its what she wanted
You told me never again
You said it but didn't mean it
I listened when you spoke
I heard you say worthless
I listened when you yelled
I heard you shouting louder
I listened to your roar
I heard you growing fierce
I wanted her escape
I needed her to leave
I wanted her happiness
I needed it then
I wanted her weak
but, I needed her strong
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