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I gotta get things off my mind

by Ladee


[color=red] :arrow: [/color]*~*Preach'en Da Truth*~*

F*** you and your criticism.
Deep within you, is what my eyes can see.
Continuously, you go against me and try to cut me from my dreams.
Backstabbers, aren't noth'en but successful haters who became slackers.
My work effort, becomes power.....
People become sacred, because them I shall devour.
College isn't always a must, as long as you have knowledge.
Bad labels aren't noth'en.....
You can overcome them with a something.
A bitch is a female dog, I bite and it hurts.
Who and what I love, is my business.....
None of your concern.
No longer I do hope, I shall have to defend this.
No promise is more guaranteed than death......
So be cautious, every time you take a breath.
Not anyone is good enough to get down in my diaphragm.
To get inside of me, is a blessing from da Messiah man.
Angels or Spirits....
They both send you a certain feel'en.
African or Indian.....
Cultural diversity is beautiful.
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, and there are very few people who can see.
If deaf.....ya lucky.
You block out da cry'en in misery.
If blind ...ya lucky.
You don't see da misfit,....That is me.

By, LaDee


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Tue Sep 06, 2005 2:29 pm
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Now this was some kinky **** :D But I really liked it. It does have "******** in da closet" spirit in it, but it has some sort of a greater messege and stuff. You go girl :D. Oh, and Welcome to Da YWs! Yo!

(Please don't swear needlessly - Firestarter)





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