Published December 20, 2010
I really didn't know which category to put this in...so this is my best guess, haha.
One of my first poems (of the few I have). Inspired by a car ride down some snowy streets. Just a cute little imagery ^_^
Let me know what you think!
-K7
To Ride a Snowflake
If I were lighter than a snowflake,
I really do believe,
The beauty of the snowflake,
Would be easier to see.
The only problem I can think of,
If I could ride a snowflake,
I would be so very tiny,
The wind would carry me away.
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To Ride a Snowflake
If I were lighter than a snowflake,
I really do believe,
The beauty of the snowflake,
Would be easier to see.
The only problem I can think of,
If I could ride a snowflake,
I would be so very tiny,
The wind would carry me away.[/quote]
bold letters= lower case
slanted part= make it anoter verse
Short and sweet. I like it. Keep writing!
Aaah!! This poem is so cute! I love it the way it's short, sweet and simple. The ryhming makes it even better (I stink at rhyming...)!!
Keep writing!!
Alzora