Radrook here a once again to offer some suggestions.
Apologies if i offend. It isn’t my intention.
Please feel full free to cast aside all things you deem not helpful.
But if you do be sure its true by being extra careful.
That having been said:
Thanks for sharing this story about a mentally disturbed cat that can reason as humans do and who needs to belong. The story speaks of an initiation ritual which is common to some gangs. Some require that the initiate subject himself to a beating by other gag members in order to demonstrate toughness. Others demand that the person inflict damage on someone else. Still others might as for a murder. But the latter are far more rare since that can lead to prison and maybe the death sentence.
A mysterious Aklanza is mentioned and the speaker tells us that she no longer is with him and that he feels scorned. A Maisey is mentioned and identified as the protagonist cat’s former owner. In short this was once a house cat raised there as a kitten who suddenly wound up on the street. The reason isn’t revealed, only that he lost his companion and now seeks membersip within a group of violent cats and finally gets it ween he kills.
I don’t find it exceedingly violent since the the evisceration isn’t described in all its gory details.
To be honest, I thought that you were using the term “cat” in the same way that people today use the word “dude”. So I at first I understood it as an indication of the time period that this is taking place and the term “cat” was in vogue.
But then as I kept reading and claws were mentioned, I realized that the story is referring to literal cats who can reason.
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