Young Writers Society

Wait just to clarify, This isn't a poem is it. Cause this feels like a poem most definitely. You seem to be pretty accurate to how you feel about animals well you only seem to be mentioning cat's here for some reason instead of the other animals like dogs and small squirrels which in my opinion mainly seems to correspond with your descriptions a bit better. Also this might be a personal but are you a furry? Just so people now a furry isn't a person who wants to do it with an animal but rather a person who just really likes a certain species of animal. I was asking this question because a lot of your works seem to be about cats and I was feeling curious and I do not mean to offend you in any way.
Conclusion: In conclusion this seems to be a wonderful in depth look you might just need to add other animals other than cats.

This is very good poetry, it truly does portray the bond with are pets.

However if you were to try and appeal to a wider audience I would segest using other animal references then cats. Unless this was more personal but as someone who is allergic to cats and has meany other types of pets that don't really lick or purr to show affection I have a bit of a harder time connecting to this more then I could have.

Other then that the writing is smooth and I like the symbolism of this poem and I hope you write more!

This story perfectly describes how we feel about our pets. Being a pet owner myself, I can relate to the text here. I'm FantasyWriter76, or Fantasy76, if you preferred. I'm reviewing this story, so let's get to it

We loves our pets and get sentimental with them as the bond between owner and pet grows. This story truly expresses the love you share with your pets. Because, after all, pets are family.

The one thing I don't like is the formatting, since this is classified as an "other" story, but it looks like a poem makes me feel weird

Overall a good story, 4.5 soft meows out of 5