Young Writers Society

Hey guys,
This is my latest work, needs a lot of editing. Any suggestions?

My love now my Fear!

Was it real to begin with, the complete emptiness fills its void so vividly,
it’s hard to see why I came here.
The sand seems grey with desire and as my happiness is rusted away,
the screams are echoed in my afterlife.
My love now my Fear!

Oh how I wished to love you and in the midst of my transgressions,
Deceit and the Lust resonating in the air.
I saw You,
And you saw me.
My existence was more suitable to anarchy, yours to symmetry.
I, floating towards the hyperbole of each perceptible experience; You, drifting asleep yet so awake.
God how I thought of Daria!

Is it worth the feeling, the false entrapment of my true being?
This is you, this is me, you are me I am you and we are us. EXTASCY.
The consummation of our souls began.
I was one with you.

Nothing lasts forever.
The anxiety will begin to breed what the Fear fed on.
The beginning was as eminent as the end.
You saw me.
My lies were laid bare in front of us,
Staring at me in silence.
A cast of acceptance in your eyes.

Your Love was unconditional, returning me to the common duality I once lacked.