Anna-Banana
A friend has gone and left my side
She's gone to a better place.
My friend has gone but has not died
She's gone to a better place.
I want my friend to know
A better place was where
She needed to go. Away from here
Away from us, and far far from home.
She needed to go, she needed to roam
She will never leave our hearts
She'll never be alone.
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Ooh. I liked that, it was cute. I try to be cute like yours, but htey just sound cheesy, like this one time, I tried to write about my best friend (who's in a wheelchair) and
NEVERMIND That was good.