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Good job on this! I really enjoyed reading this! And it sounds so professional!
I liked the characters in the story, especially the MC! Spitting out bad words like a rapper(no offence) and still getting awkward at a girl's touch like a little boy! So cute! You do have room for major character development as well as improving your writing style to fit some more descriptions as well.
And please...cut down on the swearing...(although I don't mind...)
I have no negatives, you're good to go, and I want to read more!