Howdy ☺
I’m going to review your work! ☺
First thing I’d say is beginning of a new line requires a capital letter. I won’t moan at you through it I’m just going to say it once. ☺
The sun bloomed,
threw her light on the basket,
Okay so I think you mean ‘through’ and there doesn’t need to be a comma after bloomed.
When we were done and each heart
It should be ‘we’re’ not ‘were’
Follow the silver heart string
Heartstring is one word.
This is a really cute poem!
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