Published January 16, 2011
This is basically a script that i wrote when i was 9/10/11/12 and I need feedback on it.
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this script is really adventurous and i love the expression it emphasizes on the characters' feelings . i would love it if you would write more scripts and post them here and on my club page (which is Operation: Music by the way if you want to check it out).I was really impressed that it turned our better than i originally expected. keep up the good work!