I really liked it and seemed very funny. The starting is very interesting and I like he you jump right into the story.
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“I’m supposed to be removing you and this… sofa, from the road. Don’t you realize you’re a disruption to your fellow road users?” said Parkin, eyeing the couch. Was this one of his?
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Here it's very funny because it seems like he cares more about the sofa than his daughter.
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“Look, can you please stop having a heart to heart and just move the bloody couch?” A driver shouted from the front of the queue.
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I really like it here because the father came in the mild of his lunch irritated and ends up having to be told to "get on with it"
So in short, it was a well rounded story and very funny.
Points: 105
Reviews: 5
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