Hello Flumadiddle and @woahhitherepal! {Welcome to YWS!} Kara here for a (hopefully) quick review!Give me your soul.
With that aside, I'm not the best at poetry but here we go!
Bold = grammar and flow issues.
Italics = suggestions and overallStrikethrough = remove
Underline = krazy Kara komments.
My interpretation:
depression poem. again.
Overall:
I did like this poem. It's definitely one of your better collaboration poetries keep up the great work!
Why haven’t you given me your soul yet? --
Kara
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