Published September 30, 2006
Had to delete it due to the rules of a contest I entered this poem in... sorry!
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Beautiful as always, hon.
I am torn between telling you that you need more punctuation in the second stanza, and telling you it's fine the way it is.
How about that for some constructive criticism.
Kelle