Memories pass in time but I don’t want to let you go.
I want to remember your voice.
Your life, your love.
I never want to let you go.
I want to keep holding on.
You're not alone
Together we stand
I'll be by your side
You left me.
Anakin I’m going to keep holding on.
"Keep holding on
Cause you know we'll make it through
We'll make it through
Just stay strong
Cause you know I'm here for you
I'm here for you
There's nothing you can say
Nothing you can do
There's no other way when it comes to the truth
So, keep holding on
Cause you know we'll make it through
We'll make it through "
I’m in a land of shadow and you’re so far away.
"So far away
I wish you were here
Before it's too late
This could all disappear
Before the door's closed
And it comes to an end
With you by my side
I will fight and defend "
Anakin, you’re gone and I still keep holding on.
"Keep holding on
Cause you know we'll make it through
We'll make it through
Just stay strong
Cause you know I'm here for you
I'm here for you
There's nothing you can say
Nothing you can do
There's no other way when it comes to the truth
So, keep holding on
Cause you know we'll make it through
We'll make it through
Note All credit Avril Lavgene and Eragon as well as Rebecca Moesta and George Lucas
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WOW! That is an amazing poem. I loved it i am going to make a copy and post it on my door and put it in all my binders. I like how you made it sort of like a chorus to a song but the chorus changes everytime slightly.