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The day is over
And I haven't found the meaning of it all
I don't want to sleep yet
Don't want to wake up
To start from the beginning again
The day is over, and
I haven't accomplished anything
The day is over, and
It felt just like yesterday
The day is over, and
I am alive, still
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totally not me coming to review forgetting I've already reviewed because I couldn't really see the title due to no glasses-
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goldfish memory I swear XD
This is so relatable! I tend to waste my hours away and go "what did I even do with my life today? Did time fly by really that fast?" Why do we even go to sleep if tomorrow is just going to be the same day? You're living, but you don't exactly feel alive. You're tired even though you've done nothing ad itching to do something but not interested in anything. I tend to stay up all night watching TV and stuff because I have nothing better to do. Why do t you try cooking? It usually makes a fairly good difference for me.
"I am alive, stillThe day is over" I belive you forgot to separate that. It's no big deal, but it's kinda bugging me. Have a good day!
Thanks for the review also for letting me know the mistake.
Nice poem written by the author.
no off topic talks...). We adhere to our routine but do we do something extra, something that we like, something fun? Doing the same thing over and over we do not learn anything new. Learning new things engaging in different activities is good for both mental and physical health.
"The day is over
And I haven't found the meaning of it all
I don't want to sleep yet
Don't want to wake up
To start from the beginning again
The day is over and
I haven't accomplished anything"
This poem reminds me of my thoughts in the shower, how I keep thinking my life decisions. The poem conveys a very good message of how we just keep doing the same things over and over again, the same routine, the same life, how nothing changes and how night does not change fast( "just fast how the night changes"
Keep it up.
Waiting for more.
Remember: A new learning, it a great earning.
Thank you.
Hey Kaavya, thanks for the review