Young Writers Society

I LOVE THIS! Hi, I'm ZeldaIsShiek, the Witch with the spell that immediately writes reviews for me and posts them within about ten minutes and earns me points so that the Werewolves don't win. This is great! I really like Hamilton the Musical, so naturally, I had to review this. Also, it only has one review, so more points against you! Not that it really matters that much. I'm just glad so many works are being reviewed at last! Let's get into this review.

I love how you made this a direct parody of one of my favorite Hamilton the Musical songs, "You'll Be Back" by Lin Manuel Miranda and sung by King George. I understand this song applies to you in real life, but I wasn't really involved in that, so I don't quite know what this entire song is about. I do, however, understand that it is a parody of Hamilton and, instead of King George trying to win back the Colonies through a love song, it is you getting angry at someone who told you to kill yourself. I think this comparison is very good, and I also think that the part where you say "die" repeatedly could be a quote from what the girl said to you.

That's all I can say right now because that's all I have to say, because... I don't really know why, I just know that I'm out of ideas for this song. Keep parody-ing great songs, and keep writing! See you later!

-ZeldaIsShiek

Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! Grim is here as well, drinking hot cocoa and being a slacker. *Grim looks over, glaring* So, lets get started.
*Sees you finally posted this and fangirls on the inside, reading it to the tune of You'll Be Back while grim silently hums it.* oh, um sorry, didn't see you there, reading this review. Anywho, lets carry on.
YESSS, it is out! I was so excited to read this and thanks for the tag Kara! I hope I was not the only one reading this to the tune of the original song. I can't be the only one, right?
Anyways, I did notice a few spelling mistakes but I wont be working with grammar on lyrics. This is my first lyrics review so lets see how this will go. Good, I hope.
The line, "Me and my coffin won't see it through it all!", I am guessing was spelled wrong. "It should be, maybe, "Me and My coffin won't see through it all!" That reads better anyways. Otherwise I noticed no other mistakes and things alike. All of the lines mixed really well together and nothing seemed be dodgy. Good job!
Overall I loved the lyrics and keep up the good work! Happy Halloween! I really need to go now Grim has souls to reap and he needs more cocoa. Cheerio and fruit loops to you!

Hey, I don't think I'll do a full review on this (I'm not good at reviewing songs ), but I just wanted to tell you that his name is Lin Manuel-Miranda.

@Flumadiddle