Hello DeepRoses, right off the bat I want to say I love this poem. I think it's nice how quick and brief it is and I like how you talked about how some people expect you to show more of you when they've shown almost nothing about themselves to you. You're left guessing about what that person could have beneath them and they themselves are already gung-ho about knowing who you are without opening themselves up. This brings some nostalgia up about the first year of highschool and even up to now it is very relatable. Nice poem, sorry if this review isn't that great
Points: 10
Reviews: 16
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