Haha I love this!
100/10 MASTAPEEECCCEEEE
ChieRynn is a genius the likes of which we haven't seen since Joyce!
Hey, I'm Noelani, and I hope you don't find this review offensive.Well.............. UMMMM... very funny. (Not really, I couldn't see any words so I assumed that my WiFi wasn't working ! That's not funny, okay!) I don't get where there can be suspense, maybe mystery, but not suspense. Anyway to both agree with what the blue cat says, and also type more characters for more points, I would have to also just make up what I think was done wrong and what I thinkthink was done right.
1. Grammar errors (spelling mistakes)
2. Flow uses
3. Capitalism needed
4. Etc.
With that said keep writing. EVEN IF YOU CHOSE NOT TO WRITE A SINGLE LETTER, still keep writing. I'd also like to thank you for giving me the chance to write a review with more characters for more points.
Hi ChieRynn! I was finally going to review something, and I find this. What do I even do here? >.< Why is this so funny when there is literally nothing there? What is life? But since there is nothing here I can literally say anything I want it it will be totally random.
Wait, is this supposed to be poetry? Okay then...
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Umm I can't do much here.
Well I hope this review is helpful! On what though?
Hey ChieRynn!
This had me so confused for a few moments! But all in all it was super entertaining to stare at it, drag the image around, and almost be nose to screen trying to see if anything was there. Preeeetty sure I looked completely silly XD
I would also put this in "other" so people know understand that this is not poetry. It is, in fact, other! And a pretty entertaining other, if I may say so.
Anyways, thanks for the laugh and the chuckle at my own confusion! I definitely needed it.
Hello ChieRynn! Kara here for a (hopefully) quick review!Give me your soul.
With that aside, I'm not the best at poetry but here we go!
Bold = grammar and flow issues.
Italics = suggestions and overallStrikethrough = remove
Underline = krazy Kara komments.
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