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Young Writers Society


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by ChieTheWriter, AkeliaTaske



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Fri Mar 18, 2016 9:44 pm
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AAHHHH!!!!!!!!! I AM SCREAMING SO HARD RIGHT NOWWWW!!!!! OK, in all honesty this is wayyyyy better then my story, and that last sentence.......THE FEEELLZZZ!!!! Calm down Akelia, calm down...Anyway. Great story, well written, and greatly described. Trust me, Vader isn't going to get any hold on Chie Rynn *cracks knuckles*






To enhance the cliffhanger effect, you don't know that.



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Ehhhh




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