Amazing work! I was expecting to read something completely different based off of the title, but I was pleasantly surprised. The narrator has a very strong voice in this poem, and I like how their bitter words parallel with the bitter coffee. Here is my review on each stanza:
FIRST STANZA
The first stanza really drew me in; I like how the lines are divided, making it seem like the narrator is rambling in anger or bitterness (if I'm interpreting it correctly). It sets the tone nicely. I don't know if you meant to write "god" instead of "God," but it makes sense that you did.
SECOND STANZA
I feel like this stanza was a little clunky, but I love your description of the coffee, and this stanza continues the tone nicely.
THIRD STANZA
This wrapped the poem up well. I can tell that you're very skilled in writing poetry. I always struggle with finding a good ending, so I admire how you did it.
FINAL THOUGHTS
Overall, amazing work!! I hope my review helps. Keep writing!
Points: 81
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