Hello again Buranko!
This is a really cool piece and I enjoyed reading it! I love that you write about how writing is an adventure, because that it is. An adventure for the reader and an adventure for the writer. I also love how you incorporate the seas into this. I love the ocean and everything about it, the waves, the fresh air, the sea animals, the peace it brings. I love how you compare that to writing as well. Very cute how you tie it together at the end by waking the narrator up. The only thing I would suggest would be to work on your punctuation. You have punctuation on some lines and others not, which makes it a bit confusing to read! Either way good job and keep writing!
Points: 173
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