Very nice.
I can't see you
does that make me blind?
I can't hear you
does that make me deaf?
That all works very well, involves the senses and so on.
I lost my senses long ago,
Along with my sanity,
and you.
This is also very good. Because the poem is so short, combined with the abruptness of the last line there is a very strong feeling of finality.
Nice poem.
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