Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
First Impression: OKay...well...this was a really interesting little read here. Its definitely a story that's packed with a lot more than what the surface seems to imply at any rate...well...anyway...let's see if anything that I have to say down there makes much sense...
Anyway let's get right to it,
There are times I look out my window at the woods down the street, with its trees swaying in the wind and the wildflowers all in bloom like Bob Ross ran his brush over the ground. Oh what I'd give to leave it all behind and take you with me into the serenity that surely resides outside my window. We could walk beside the river and admire the trees, laugh at the newly hatched turtles crawling through the leaves, maybe even take a nap beneath the shade of an elderly poplar who will surely outlive me.
Okay...not sure who exactly our protagonist here is talking to but this certainly does make it really interesting...wondering what this beautiful land outside could be here and why this person here can't get out. The description there to show the outside world is also pretty neat. Its definitely doing a good job showing how peaceful and relaxing it is...well let's see where this story is headed.
However, I do not get that luxury. For the "real world" keeps me trapped. My potential keeping me in the rat race and my wishes left locked up. What even is real anymore? I ask myself and consider this question often.
Okay...well...that...that very interesting...I'm guessing this whole being trapped here is somewhat more metaphorical here and probably referring to this person being trapped by having too much work or something. This definitely can't be something involving actual chains and locks here...aaand that definitely makes for a very interesting idea here.
But writing, writing gives me that escape. It gives me the ability to explore lands unknown and live in worlds unheard of outside of my room. Perhaps it is the writing that represents the biggest escape, keeping me curious and thoughtful. For now I shall write, and maybe write some more, so that these thoughts can be preserved forever more.
OKay...well...that's a very interesting ending to slap on there...the writing in one sense definitely seems like maybe its some sort of hobby or something that offers this person some respite from their generally super busy schedule but then...also its kind of giving off a vibe of some literally trapped in a room...xD...well at any rate, this is a nice ending.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
Overall: Overall...I think this makes for an interesting read. I hope it interpreted this somewhat correctly here. At any rate, that's all I've gotta say for now.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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