The poem was beautiful. The rhyme scheme was amazing and your word choice was phenomenal. The topic you chose was perfect and made me somehow just cling to your writing. I also love how mature it was and how it wasn't traditional. This is honestly one of my favorite poems I have read on this website and am intrigued on your future dark poem work. My only complaint is the way you signed your name. I would suggest you use ~, -, or something of the sorts. It is rather distracting but that is a personal opinion. Anyways, your poem has inspired me in a way. Amazing job!
Points: 11
Reviews: 24
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